Friday, November 12, 2010

The Holders

I always liked these creepy stories.
Heres vol.2 of a series of like 500 lol

In any city, in any country, go to any mental institution or halfway house in you can get yourself to. When you reach the front desk, ask to visit someone who calls himself "The Holder of the End". Should a look of child-like fear come over the workers face, you will then be taken to a cell in the building. It will be in a deep hidden section of the building. All you will hear is the sound of someone talking to themselves echo the halls. It is in a language that you will not understand, but your very soul will feel unspeakable fear. 

Should the talking stop at any time, STOP and QUICKLY say aloud "I'm just passing through, I wish to talk." If you still hear silence, flee. Leave, do not stop for anything, do not go home, don't stay at an inn, just keep moving, sleep where your body drops. You will know in the morning if you've escaped succesfully. 

If the voice in the hall comes back after you utter those words continue on. Upon reaching the cell all you will see is a windowless room with a person in the corner, speaking an unknown language, and cradling something. The person will only respond to one question. "What happens when they all come together?" 

The person will then stare into your eyes and answer your question in horrifying detail. Many go mad in that very cell, some disappear soon after the meeting, a few end their lives. But most do the worst thing, and look upon the object in the person's hands. You will want to as well. Be warned that if you do, your death will be one of cruelty and unrelenting horror. 

Your death will be in that room, by that person's hands. 

That object is 1 of 2538. They must never come together. 


  1. IDK why you'd use CAPS in an essay. There are more traditional ways of emphasizing words.

    Nice article though.

  2. I love short and creepy. Any chance of seeing more of the series?

  3. cool article!

    short creepy stories are awesome!

    any chance of more such stories soon?

  4. This just a great articale! Keep up the good work!

  5. Yes, I'll be publishing more of these from time to time, when I have the chance.

  6. The Holder series would actually make for a really cool game - too bad most of the material belongs to a huge number of various people, so attaining the rights for it would be impossible.

  7. Oh, definitely hope to see more.

    @Craig Phillips, I totally agree. This would make a good game...if there wasn't so much objects and objects that could kill you.

  8. i read it again for the fun of it and it still gives me the creeps

  9. i read it again!
    still amazes me though lol

    i must save a copy of it now!

  10. this is a preeeeeeeeety creeepy tale

  11. Graces her subjects, and her thoughts the king. Supporting!